Evaluation of Peer Reviews

THE FOLLOWING ARE COMMENTS LEFT BY MY PEERS:


I really liked how the actors played into their parts very well. I actually feel like the actors are into the drama and scene as any other actors.


I didn’t like how distant the audio was for tehwaiter and the beginning with the narrator.


It makes me want to see the importance that the waiter has on the storyline further.


They spelled waiter wrong!


Make sure to spell waiter right and just get closer to the phone for the audio and dialogue.



I liked the idea of it and the acting.


It was hard to hear the dialogue and I think Reid’s voice over could of been louder.


Yes this looked like a movie opener I wanted to know what happens next.


No I was not confused.


Just make Reid’s voice over louder.



- setting
- plot
- acting
- camera shots


- unclear audio
- unfitting editing


Yes it did look like a movie opener. I do want to know what happens next due to the expense at the end.


No there wasn’t anything that left me confused.


I think more fitting editing, a title sequence, and music will help bring this together.



I liked the costumes, the props, and the some of the background noise.


I didn’t like how some parts were quite.


It did look like a movie opener, and I did want to know what happened next because it looks interesting.


Why it was day time.


I feel like if it was night time it would fit the film better.



I liked the costume of the characters and they all matched the mood.


The background sound was way too high.


yes, it made me want to know more about the kidnapper.


Yes, why would people keep going to palumbos if people keep getting kidnapped?


Cut off the background noice so the audio is clearer.



I like the plot of the movie and lighting was excellent as well as the clips.


The sound was not good and the clips were choppy in the beginning.


This did look like a movie opener and I would want to know what happens.


It was very easy to pick up on and nothing confusing.


Lower the background noise and make the actors voices louder.



I liked the plot and the scene where the girls set the drinks down.


I disliked that the audio was hard to hear.


Yes it mostly looked like a movie opener. I wanted to know what is going to happen to the girls that were drugged.


I was a little confused at what Isaiah was doing to the drinks. It wasn't totally clear to me that he was poisoning the drinks.


I would mainly suggest to fix the audio so we can hear it better.



I like the story line and the voice over


I disliked that you could not hear them when they were talking and some of the lighting isn’t very good.


Yes it did because it gives you a good idea of what the film would be about and has a plot set up.


No I wasn’t confused at all.


Fix some of the lighting and the sound.



I liked the concept and the camera shot of the glasses when they were sit down


The audio, the back ground audio is louder than the voices


Yea I would watch it. Has a good concept I like the mystery and the way it is set up.


Not really


Just tune down background audio and up the voice audio



The set and the waiter looked really natural and the way they talk seems natural as well


Background was too loud.


Yes, it did look like a movie opener, and I expected something to happen afterwards.


No.


Make it have a direction towards the end, like, somebody is catching on to him, or he is getting more and more ambitious with his crimes.



I liked the acting especially when walking out the restaurant.


I don't like how the voice over overlaps the audio done in the shot. I also don't like advertising underage drinking (better be sparkling apple juice).


Yes, there was mystery as to what would happen to the other girl that walked in the restaurant which made it seem like there was more to the story.


nah


Keep the audio clear.



The restaurant and the outfits and the acting.


All the background noise made hearing them hard.


Yes, and yes, will he continue killing people and getting away with it or will he get caught in some way.


Not confused, just unnecessarily open ended unless allowing for it to be part of a big reveal later, where did he take them when leading them out, how did he hide them.


Less open ended or if it is on purpose, then foreshadow.

THE FOLLOWING IS MY SUMMARY AND TAKE ON THE FEEDBACK:

There were several good comments about the acting, setting, and plot, with all saying that they would want to continue watching to see what happens next. The main complaint was with the audio. Some parts were too noisy, some where too faint, and some noises were distracting. I agree with my peers about this and will focus primarily on fixing the audio components of the video, as well as including better transitions.